2008年12月20日 星期六

meeting with teacher Liang (2)

Before meeting with my teacher, Emma Liang, I wrote an outline of my research paper to discuss. I asked teacher Liang how to arrange it would be great, and she told me that I could choose the appropriate part of my interview about foreign student to support some main ideas in different paragraphs.
In addition, teacher Liang told me some faults in my article. For example, sometimes I use wrong adverbs to link sentences together, so she suggest me to read the last chapter to know how to use them. Besides, I also make some mistake about wrong on sentence.
I will improve these defects as soon as possible to show better research paper in the end of this semester.

沒有留言: